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 In some cases it can be hard to believe that something bad can turn in to something good. A officer in California can tell you all about one of these special cases. In Barstow, California a 53 year old named Janice Jones was accidentaly shot in her leg, when her dog knocked her gun off of a seat in her motor home. "this is something that you actually see a lot, accidents happen." said officer Rye. When taken to the hospital jones dog was put with animal control officers. "we noticed that the dog had fresh cigarette burns on its forehead"said animal control officer Solis " after we noticed the burns we had to file a police report on jones. Thankful everyone was ok and the dog will find a brand new home where he will be treated right. "it could have been worse" said officer Rye.

20 QUESTIONS:uniforms 1.Why do you think that school uniforms would be a good choice for your school? 2.What do you think the uniforms should look like? 3.Do you think that the boy uniforms should be the same as the girls? 4.What do you think that the teaches the kids? 5.What are you going to do if kids can not afford to buy the uniforms? 6.What days of the year, if any will they not have to wear uniforms? 7.What made you want the school to have uniforms? 8. What would you like to see change in the school because of these uniforms? 9. When do you plan to change the dress code? 10.How do you think the students will react to this change 11.Why do you that some parents might be mad about this new change? 12.What will be the consequences if students decide not to follow the dress code? 13. how could the students change the uniforms to fit there style? 20 OUESTIONS 1. who do you have to thank for getting you to student of the month? 2. what do you think you did to be where...

1. The 3 good leads to use are "How Lead" , "Why Lead", and "What Lead". 2. 3. Direct Quote-should be linked to the paragraph before them. 4. this quote should elaborate on the previous paragraph. 5."the quote," who's said it. "more of the quote." 6. Attribution- something ascribed 7. the form of attribution should be noun then verb. 8. transitions- use parts of the direct quotes to create the transition. and then use the rest of the quote as direct quote. 9. Fact transition, Indirect quote transition, and Partial quote transition. 10. 1. are the most important and recent facts first       2. is the story accurate       3. are the paragraphs short       4. is the sentence structure varied in the story       5. is the story an double-spaced so that it is easy to read       6. does your story flow       7. did you use active voice 11. keeping your opinion out of the story, paragraphs ...

   

CE #2 1.  Austin got a total of 3 inches of rain. 2. Mitch Fuller, Douglas Gibbins, Stephanie Gharakhanian, Sarah Mills, and Julie Ann Nitcsch 3. Transocean, Technip FMC, and Diamond Offshore Drilling 4.Novak Djokovic was the U.S open winner. 5.The Capitol Studios Sessions, Me and My Shadow, and Jurassic Park. 6. the story "Defense Giant BAE helps enable a future for bees" focus on a company called BAE that helps educate the public on bees. 

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