WRITING STUCTURES

1. The 3 good leads to use are "How Lead" , "Why Lead", and "What Lead".
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3. Direct Quote-should be linked to the paragraph before them.
4. this quote should elaborate on the previous paragraph.
5."the quote," who's said it. "more of the quote."
6. Attribution- something ascribed
7. the form of attribution should be noun then verb.
8. transitions- use parts of the direct quotes to create the transition. and then use the rest of the quote as direct quote.
9. Fact transition, Indirect quote transition, and Partial quote transition.
10. 1. are the most important and recent facts first
      2. is the story accurate
      3. are the paragraphs short
      4. is the sentence structure varied in the story
      5. is the story an double-spaced so that it is easy to read
      6. does your story flow
      7. did you use active voice
11. keeping your opinion out of the story, paragraphs too long, trying to use all of the information.


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