The Big Day
who- Mary, Luke, Josh
what- a wedding, and a car
where- a stormy day / at a church
when- Mary's wedding day
why- Luke is trying to get to the wedding in time because Luke is in love with Mary
how- Driving his car really fast
bride looks happy, glowing
then it goes to the forest a man driving looks like its raining
then shoes the "dad' we think important/looks like he doesn't care not happy
flips back to the car
Mary is flipping her ring
Luke looks at his watch
dad looks at his watchLuke has to slow downed then goes around all the cars
dad gets up and holds daughters hand
dad looks at his watch again
you can tell Luke is driving a long time going from forest to plains to coast
bride looks at the window as if she is looking for someone
flips to Luke he gets angery
pulls up to the church and runs out of the car into the wedding
the bride sees Luke and you can tell she gets embarrassed because she knows something is about to happen. Josh looks at her and is confused and the looks up and sees Luke and gets let down
The big day...
Racing to the girl of his dreams, Luke is speeding through the dirt roads to get to Mary in time.
"please, God let me get there in time."Luke said.
Meanwhile Mary is getting into a beautiful just, looking happy as ever.
"you look great Mary, this is going to bet he best day of your life." Abby, Mary's best friend said.
As it gets close to the ceremony the weather gets worse where Luke is and he is having trouble making it there safe.
"any other day it would be hot and sunny outside but of course today it has to be storming."Luke Said.
Back at the venue, Mary's dad is starting to look nervous and keeps looking to see what time it is, like there is something that he is waiting for.
"he should be here by now Mary." Mary's dad said.
Still racing through the bad weather Luke is starting to get mad, as if he has messed up and that he should have came sooner.
"why didn't I leave sooner, can it please just stop raining." Luke said.
As Mary's dad starts to get worried it makes Mary start to panic, as she twist her engagement ring on and off her finger.
"Dad maybe he's just not coming." Mary Said
As Luke is driving you can tell you he is coming closer to the wedding venue because he is starting to get more impatient.
"you're so stupid Luke just drive faster." Luke said to himself
pulling up to the church Luke gets out super fast and races to find Mary and hop that he is not to late.
"oh Mary, please come back to me."Luke said.
As Luke stormed into the church, Mary looks to the door and as sooner as she sees him she puts her head down as if she is embarrassed for her soon to be husband.
"Mary how could you do this to me, I can't believe I thought for one second that we would ever end up together."Josh, Marys soon to be ex-husband said.
what- a wedding, and a car
where- a stormy day / at a church
when- Mary's wedding day
why- Luke is trying to get to the wedding in time because Luke is in love with Mary
how- Driving his car really fast
bride looks happy, glowing
then it goes to the forest a man driving looks like its raining
then shoes the "dad' we think important/looks like he doesn't care not happy
flips back to the car
Mary is flipping her ring
Luke looks at his watch
dad looks at his watchLuke has to slow downed then goes around all the cars
dad gets up and holds daughters hand
dad looks at his watch again
you can tell Luke is driving a long time going from forest to plains to coast
bride looks at the window as if she is looking for someone
flips to Luke he gets angery
pulls up to the church and runs out of the car into the wedding
the bride sees Luke and you can tell she gets embarrassed because she knows something is about to happen. Josh looks at her and is confused and the looks up and sees Luke and gets let down
The big day...
Racing to the girl of his dreams, Luke is speeding through the dirt roads to get to Mary in time.
"please, God let me get there in time."Luke said.
Meanwhile Mary is getting into a beautiful just, looking happy as ever.
"you look great Mary, this is going to bet he best day of your life." Abby, Mary's best friend said.
As it gets close to the ceremony the weather gets worse where Luke is and he is having trouble making it there safe.
"any other day it would be hot and sunny outside but of course today it has to be storming."Luke Said.
Back at the venue, Mary's dad is starting to look nervous and keeps looking to see what time it is, like there is something that he is waiting for.
"he should be here by now Mary." Mary's dad said.
Still racing through the bad weather Luke is starting to get mad, as if he has messed up and that he should have came sooner.
"why didn't I leave sooner, can it please just stop raining." Luke said.
As Mary's dad starts to get worried it makes Mary start to panic, as she twist her engagement ring on and off her finger.
"Dad maybe he's just not coming." Mary Said
As Luke is driving you can tell you he is coming closer to the wedding venue because he is starting to get more impatient.
"you're so stupid Luke just drive faster." Luke said to himself
pulling up to the church Luke gets out super fast and races to find Mary and hop that he is not to late.
"oh Mary, please come back to me."Luke said.
As Luke stormed into the church, Mary looks to the door and as sooner as she sees him she puts her head down as if she is embarrassed for her soon to be husband.
"Mary how could you do this to me, I can't believe I thought for one second that we would ever end up together."Josh, Marys soon to be ex-husband said.
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