FEATURE WRITING PREVIEW

1. This lead does not give you all the things that a hard new leads does, its a lot smaller.
2. who: paragraph 1
what: paragraph  4
where: paragraph 1
when: paragraph 1
why: paragraph 1
how: paragraph 1
3. yes
4. yes
5. Williams, Frank Willson, Tony Florentino, Ken Andrews, Doral Chenoweth, and Kevin McLoughlin
6. I think that the most powerful quote is when Williams says "I'm trying hard to get it back".
7. 33 paragraphs
8. 756 words 
9. The lead and the last paragraph are significant because the tie the story together.
10. I think the writer did this so that it shows the read that something little trued in to something big, and show the growth of this person.
11.yes
12.yes
13. it made me really like the man, and have more sympathy for the situation.
14. mo, but the video helped.
15.yes
16. the writer does this by describing what kind of people are interested in him working got their company. 

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